Tuesday, April 23, 2013

4-23-13

So still busy with school, but to help pass the time here is the latest piece of work I have done for my Advanced Creative Writing class.



It was the midnight hour. Wispy fog pooled inches above cobble stone streets. A damp musky growth that crept along, lapping at brick walls and wood lamp posts. Southwestern winds hushed by, caressing and exciting those white particles making them swirl and flitter as the breeze gently knocked a tavern signpost carved with the name "Milden's" against a red slated roof, and rattling its chains that dangled from hooks. Above gray clouds blanketed the heavens, rolling and tumbling from the might of forceful frigid north winds, a hint of summer's coming demise.
Windows, dark and silent, stared out at the specks of flickering lamp lights, their curtains pulled taut, closed to the darkness and what lurked there. Only the lone tavern's single window peeked through, dim light straining through the bottom and creases, but was equally silent. The jangle and clinks, and throaty rumbles broken by bustling laughs and shouts one expected floating just outside such a building, were missing, adding a knowing chill to the night air.
    It was a normal abnormal night for the tavern as a few of the usual patrons gathered inside, the rest too fearful to brave the darkness, something that had grown commonplace over the past eight months. Just as well, no one would find solace tonight at the bottom of their mugs.
A stranger lounged in the corner of the tavern, sitting where the lantern and candle lights dared not breach.  His silhouette blended in with the gloom, a phantom with vivid crystalline eyes staring from the shadows. With a stillness that was not natural he sat there with one leg stretched out and full mug resting on his other knee, watching and listening, hardly ever blinking. He wore a wary scowl that both intimidated and repelled those in the room. All the same, the room's occupants had swiftly forgotten him, his laidback guise and impassive expression quickly cooling any interest or concerns.
The silence was stifling as a remnant echo of what was lacking hummed hollowly. It told of the four absent merchant brothers that normally sat at the bar top every night after the markets closed, pouring over their trade books, their debates always escalading into heated arguments that descended into brawls after a few dozen pints of ale. It sighed the songs of joint voices slurred together when the music was throbbing through beating hearts and pumping veins and stomping feet. It whispered laughter and cheers as men and women alike dared each other to arm wrestling matches. It moaned the sounds of living.
There was another silence - that of twelve bodies inhabiting the room and breathing, softly, in-and-out, in-and-out, in-and-out. And wooden chairs groaning as the ten patrons' shifted their weight, their hushed murmurs struggling to fill the void. Then there was the barkeep, his footfalls the only noise to break the lull. Heavy harsh thumps coupled with the slow strokes of a linen cloth, washing the red grains of the bar or marble mugs of black.
The phantom in the corner frowned.
This was not what he expected. He had not come to the upscale tavern with elegant redwood tables, marble mugs, and expensive piss-water to enjoy the pleasure of snobby, egotistical aristocrats. Instead he was hoping the unshackled tongues laced with sweet ale would help these men divulge their secrets. Regrettably the normal abnormal night provided him with tight lipped, soft spoken men who solemnly drank to the bottom of their mugs, and flinched at footsteps. Footsteps! They were little better than skittish herd animals. It seemed the oppressive force he was observing lay siege to this city, slithered within the tavern walls and coiled in their mugs and guts, tainting them along with everyone else.
This is pointless, he thought, scowl deepening.
Bringing his full mug to his lips, he looked down at the golden-brown ale capped with cream froth and took a swig. If they would not reveal their secrets then he would go else were. But it was best if he finished the expensive piss-water first. No need to waste that.
The phantom was three gulps in when one of the guards -a short bulbous man who barely fit within the confines of his chair, fat rolls flopped over the arms- raised his voice, "Tis not natural, I say." Bringing his mug slowly down and resting it back on his knee, his crystalline gaze focused on the man as the five guards around the large man groaned or shook their heads, hastily lifting their mugs to their lips. Realizing how loud his voice had been, the large man chose to whisper next, "Not natural, not at all." Shaking his head, his double chin quivered and he eased himself by knocking back some of his own ale.
The six guards sat at the far back wall, shimmering a sea of colors in their horrid kaleidoscope armor complete with frilly lace bunched at their necks and wrists. They were the joke of Castrum, and if this were not a normal abnormal night the surrounding patrons would have tossed taunting jeers at them. No doubt angering one or two and staring yet another brawl.
An older member of the guard broke the new hush as he snorted into his mug. He sat reclined much like the others, sitting across from the large man. After drinking he brought his lower lip up and slurped off the ale that accented his faintly graying mustache with froth. Sighing, he set the mug back onto the worn table and leaned back once more.
"Death is death. Nothing about it is pretty, but it comes for us all," his voice rasped rich and deep, subtle and yet commanding, underlining the age his middle-aged looking body held, "Only the lucky or sheltered reach the upper four hundreds these days and no one past five hundred. Whatever spark our ancestors had that blessed them with such long lives is slowly disappearing, and us killing each other makes little difference." He paused, rubbing his mustache with the back of his fingers as he sorted out his thoughts. "Though, I do supposed dying in one's sleep all withered and forgetful is a far more peaceful means to pass on to the next life..." Shrugging one shoulder, he crossed his arms. "That is not for me."
A harsh barking laugh startled all but the phantom. The barkeep and four other patrons turned to glance or frown at the group. To the right of the older fellow, the offender reclined in his chair and slammed his mug on the table, sloshing the golden-brown ale and cream froth over the sides.
Those under his command called him Scar.
The name was well allotted given the magnitude of scars that carved out his face. Most were from training accidents with a blade in his younger years, some because growing up he couldn't adjust to his ever growing body and had been clumsy for it, and a few were from his duty taking down bandits on the roadways. But the biggest and ugliest shimmered in the lights as a knotted mess of white and pink, a giant blob of scar tissue that seared off the skin on the top left side of his head, making hair unable to grow there, and stretching down to the left eyebrow and cheekbone, barely missing his eye.
This one he still refused to tell people how he came to own. The most popular rumor among the guards was that he tripped and fell into a hearth fire at the Lord and Lady's estate when a servant stumbled upon him having relations with their fair blooming daughter. How ever he gained the scar, it was because of it that he shaved his head completely, all of this only adding to his overall rough appearance that had most backing away from his tall bulky mass.
"Come now, Senus. Don't tell me your bones are aching already. You're what? Three hundred and twenty something?" With his free hand, Scar absentmindedly jerked at the yellow lace at his neck. "If you want a blade through your gut so bad, I got a sword and an arm that can help your cause."
"I'm three hundred and eighty-four, kid."
"And my offer still stands, old man."
The group chuckled, partly to ease the already foreboding mood around them and mostly because they didn't know what else to do. When seconds slipped by and the older man still said nothing, the sound died off, falling into an awkward hush that had them all staring at the golden-brown ale as they guzzled more.
"I don't know, Saer," said a younger man sitting on the other side of the older fellow, careful to address the older man with a term of respect after Scar so heedlessly disregarded his age. He nodded to the overwrought man across from them. "Timoth may be right. I... I have never seen deaths quite like these."
With his name the large man shifted, head coming up as he pulled his chubby cheeks away from his mug. His eyes were wide and he nodded. "Bloodless," he whispered as he leaned forward, the light danced sinisterly on his pudgy face, "All of them."
The younger man shivered. "With their throats ripped out and many of them gutted, their hearts missing?" Refusing to meet any of his peers' gazes, he played with the lace at his wrist. "There should have been blood everywhere..."
  "Castrum's got its first mad killer, was bound to happen." Grumbling about the lace at his neck, Scar continued to tug at it before muttering, "About time too, I'm tired of these blighted bandits."
The younger man shook his head, finally looking up. "That's the thing. I talked to the messengers and they all speak of things like this happening only in small towns far from any main city. And one even said a few villages near the wall have disappeared without a trace."
"So," Scar snapped, making the younger man flinch and drop his eyes back down to the wood grains streaking across the table.
"So..." Senus said casually, "He is saying this is not a normal mad killer, kid." He reached for his mug and took a drink, and again slurped off the froth gathered at his mustache. "And I have to agree."
"Gods, I hate this blighted lace." The rip of fabric followed Scar's outburst and seconds later he sighed, relieved from the monstrosity as he tossed the yellow lace to the middle of the table. With it out of the way his dark gaze settled on Senus. "Don't tell me you believe the messengers and those stories of blood-snatchers, old man. If that is the case maybe you are becoming senile and someone should put you out of your misery."
The older man stared at the torn lace, brow raised slightly with a tense upward turn of his lips before glancing at him. "That's the twentieth armor you have... altered. If this senile mind serves me correct the quartermaster told you not to destroy anymore or he would dock it from your pay."
"I'd like to see him try! Besides, this armor is ridiculous." His arm swept out, gesturing to everyone but himself. "You look like bumbling fools."
"Lady Alsea designed them for us, we should be honored."
"Honored? Honored seriously, old man? I had bandits laughing at the roads-unit the other day."
"Those wouldn't happen to be the same bandits that you let get away by not seeing to their flank, now would it?" The older man covered his taunting smile with another sip of ale as the other guards chuckled. The sound still echoing hollow in the silent room.
Scar glowered but said nothing.
As the chuckles faded the older man sighed.  He spoke of his younger years. The hard life as a messenger and the fascinating things one can learn, as well as the frightening things most knew to keep to themselves. Finally concluding that just because something couldn't yet be explained did not mean such things, like Blood-snatchers and wandering trees, did not exist and could not be a natural force in the world.
Back and forth the guards rambled on about the murders that were quaking Castrum and shattering the illusions of people's happy peaceful lives. One would suggest a possible offender, or a group. Only for the others to bring forth reasons why it couldn't be them. One such group was the Sevand. Originally known as the Band of Seven, they had started out as thieves struggling to get by and over the decades had become a gang not to be taken lightly. They had won the hearts and minds of the common people, helping those in need and seeing to the poor.
Normally they wouldn't be considered in the slightest. But it was believed they had been involved in an incident concerning the prison tower break in seven months ago and a follow guard's death. The younger man spoke animatedly for them, waving his hands around wildly, face reddening. Scars joked about him rooting for delinquents. That gave them all a laugh as he sputtered for words.
Rubbing his thumb against the handle of his mug, Senus stared intently at the motion as he said, "You know... It could be related to that disease that destroyed the kingdom of Gävanna."
Whispers fell flat. Chairs ceased groaning. The barkeep stopped cleaning the mugs, his linen rag limp in one hand with a partially dry mug in the other. He gave the guards a worried look, his face pale and the ashen hue spreading up to his scalp, hardly hidden by the feeble attempt to comb the thinning hair over to one side. Even the phantom man watching from the corner jerked, letting his mug go and spilling the ale as it clattered to the floor. Crystalline eyes vanished in the shadows for a second before flaring, catching the radiant stray rays of the lanterns as he straightened in his chair. One of the patrons began to sob into his arms. The man with him turned to glare at the older man and the guards as he patted his friend on the shoulder.
There were reasons why no one mentioned the lost kingdom. The pain caused by "the plague" was still too fresh three decades later.
Needing nothing more from the guards, the phantom man rose from his perch. With a silence that should have been impossible in the already silent room, he stepped over his spilt drink and across the room to the door without anyone noticing. Only the barkeep heard the sound of a fluttering duster as the phantom walked into the night with the wispy mist greeting him, waltzing around his legs.

Wednesday, April 17, 2013

4-17-13

Less than two weeks until graduation. Very busy. O.o My head hurts from all I have to do. I haven't forgotten about my fanfictions. Simply don't have the time to even think about them. But with only two weeks left and then another week for finals that means I'm getting closer to free time. So woots!

Thursday, April 4, 2013

4-4-13

Still working on Falling Rain... Sort of... lol. Anyways, just posted two of my projects I worked on for my writing class. Since I'm not publishing anything on fanfiction I thought whoever read my blogs might like to have those to keep them busy. They are under the tab of original works and would love some critics back on them.

Cheers