6-25-12

Soooo. Posted that Chapter 4 of Falling Rain and almost finished with 5. Really hope more people start reading it. And reviewing. Bums me when I don't get any. Uh, started working on Choices. I'm still hung up on that stupid sex scene between Goku/ChiChi. But I have gotten further into it and I have gotten better. I really think the biggest issue is I just have problems seeing the two of them this intimate. -.- Sucks. I might have to chicken out and give what I have, start the next scenes and get it over with cause I really want to get this Saga done with to work on the second. I also just finished my first revision of Resistance Chapter 1. I have to go through it a little more when my eyes aren't so tired, but should have that done soon. Also went through my first chapter of Night Robin. LOVE IT! Fixed a few things. Also started the second Chapter 2 that...
This is what I got so far. Few things to keep in mind, this is a futuristic world where Ants are extinct (along with many other species) and Squirrels terrifying the people who live in the poor area's. They are massive and ugly mutated creatures. For some reason my muse came up with it as the thing for this world and I ran with it (really ran with it lol as you will read).


       The aroma of crisp sheets, fine silk, and the scent of overly richness greeted Robyn when she woke up with a bothersome sunray dancing on her face. She groaned, turning her face into the exceedingly fluffed pillow, hoping to return to the bliss of sleep. Unfortunately the oversized squirrel of a migraine made his presence known as he continued the sunrays dance. Each time his oversized foot stomped down her head would vibrate like a drum. Moaning a curse, she opened her eyes only to promptly close them. Her light sensitive eyes felt aflame even behind the darkness of her lids.
       What the blazes did I do last night? Lying there on her stomach in the super comfy bed, she tried to recall her last waking moments. Nothing came to her right away. Had she gone on some binge? She opened her mouth, moving her tongue around and tasted the tall-tale signs of cotton mouth. Must have. She shifted, moving to stretch her legs out, every muscle in her body protested. That and she could feel the luxurious silk against her bare flesh. She was completely naked. I must have had a really fun time.      



Hehe. So yeah, I've been a busy girl with my writing. I also plan to go over Death's Grace too. Maybe I'll do that now... Or Choices... Or... I don't know. I'm all over the place lol. Night, or rather morning all!

6-21-12

Weird dreams lately.... Very good sign! My best times for writing stem from bizarre and crazy dreams. Which I have to say I finally finished the fourth chapter to Falling Rain, my beta for it is going over it now and should have it posted soon. AND!!! I've started into the following chapter. At a good 4,500 words or so. I also got an itching to starting writing Death's Grace (more like rewrite then add) and then rewrite Resistance. I also got all of my beta reading done but for two things. Someone asked to me to read, not go through with a fine editor viewing, their story I had helped them shape a few months back and then I have to edit the second chapter to someone else's. Considering I had, what... five, six beta stuff to do yesterday I think that's a pretty damn good job :D.

*On a side note, I thought I should start putting songs that I listen to while writing. I know I'm a little OCD so if you can't I suggest don't listen to a song over and over like I do (don't want you hating them), but you guys should check them out!
Songs for Falling Rain: Sad Violin Song & Firelands, The Best of Celtic Mustic

6-18-12

So due to a screw-up on my part (and I feel the school was being sly in their websites), I won't be taking a second class. Which means other than the few hours I work a week, I will be writing. :D Yay! First thought, I should get my beta reading done. Then finish that Falling Rain chapter, work either on Choices or Death's Grace. Also need to work on at least one of my original stories... So yeah, expect to see more of me on FF.

6-17-12

Well, back home after a fun and interesting weekend.  Went to a wedding near Seattle. First of all I'm a Pagan and it was a Catholic wedding, IN a church. I felt itching and kept rolling my eyes at parts, but I didn't burn so that's good. The after party was good... until someone danced so hard they dislocated their knee and we had to call the EMT's. How many people can say someone danced their knee  out at my wedding? lol Now that I'm back I'll start my beta'ing and writing. I unfortunately couldn't this week end. If we weren't at a wedding we were driving and I ate something Friday that made me ill and my stomach extreme sensitive. Sucked sooooo much!! I also start my next summer class tomorrow. A literature class... sounds like so much fun. (I'm being sarcastic if you can't tell.) Anyway, that's about it. G'night all!

Fanfiction/General 6-13-12

Been a while since I've posted anything. Just got free time and my first class of the summer is over with. After a length writers block and Diablo 3 I can finally say that I am back and better than ever with my writing. Only my muse has decided that it want's to write for Falling Rain and not Choices. (Which I just love the image for... probably why I was drawn to it.) But I'll take what I can get. Chapter one is getting a face lift. Like some of my DBZ writing I feel I've progressed and don't like the first chapter. Two and Three will remain the same except for repeated words. I noticed while reviewing chapter 2 for a class that I had a lot of again's in there. And I hope to have this all updated by tonight and if not definitely tomorrow. Since I'm almost done with chapter rewrite. As for my other writings, fear not, I have not forgotten. Believe me. My biggest issue these past weeks was, what do I focus on? And my mind going in several directions at once. I couldn't simply concentrate on one story. Anyways, until next time... Cheerio!