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Ahh I'm really loving chapter 28's starting scene from Gohan's pov. I was trying really hard to sound like a five year old boy. So far my favorite quote is "Big people -especially girls- were strange people." To make the scene overall sound like it was coming from a five year old, I had to use really simple sentences. He this... he that. Or when they were complex they didn't really follow the rules right. Hopefully it comes off as a characterization and not me looking bad. Anyways, off to bed and to figure out what else I need to do for this chapter.